It sounds like s**t. :angry:
Looks like I really can't write rock music. In this song only one instrument sounds cool - drumset.

EDIT: I changed a little in solo. There was undefined moment.

EDIT EDIT: No, I couldn't stand the ending! :wall:

i can't hear a thing..

That song is OK but it does getting anyoing the way it pauses.

It's not that bad. I like the pauses, although perhaps they aren't needed in the first 90 seconds.