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[KingMudkip]

I don't have a ton of free time, but I'm willing to do what I can.

[peyre]

Sure, I'll help if you still need volunteers. Not sure how much I'll be able to contribute, but what I do should be high quality.

[person on extremes]

alright thanks.

[Astaldo711]

I'm constantly being asked to proofread and correct my co-workers emails before they are sent to customers. I'll be happy to help out when you are recruiting once more.

[Ohne Mitleid]

I don't know if I would have time in the future to dedicate to this. However, the following reviews need correction, as far as I can tell:

7th Legion - under the Notes section, last sentence - spelling: "...overwriting the oringal file, and play!" Should be 'original'

007 - License to Kill - last paragraph (typo?): "...fan and, offcourse, any Bond fan." Should be 'of course' instead of 'offcourse'

1-0 Soccer Manager. Rough English in spots. Suggest possible rework.

1000 Miglia
- Second paragraph, second sentence: "Manufactures needed to decrease..." Should be 'Manufacturers'
- Second paragraph, third sentences: "It was fist thought that..." Should be 'first'
- Third paragraph, third sentence: "When you finished select the year..." Should be 'When you finish, ' or 'When you are finished, ' or 'When you have finished'
- Fourth paragraph, fifth sentence: "When you like to know where the hell you are..." Should be 'When you want to know' or 'When you would like to know'
- Last paragraph under How to Run the Game: "But no prob, it is includes." Should be 'included'

hne

[DarthHelmet86]

Don't worry about that Dave I will find the pages and post them into the Grammar section. Thank you very much Ohne.

Well I might only post two of the pages into Grammar the other two I might just edit onsite since it's only a few changes.

[Ohne Mitleid]

I have proofed the first 30 games listed on Abandonia, of which I have already posted 4. I don't know if this is the proper forum to be posting what I have found since it seems more like the Grammar Squad sign-up forum.

Could someone either redirect me to the proper venue/outlet or give me some guidance?

Thanks
Ohne

[DarthHelmet86]

For other people wanting to join the squad please make sure you have allowed other users to PM you...otherwise I can not send you the review to test..and thus you can't get in.

[captain38]

This is only my second post on this forum. However, grammar squad seemed to leap off the screen and into my being. Although I am no genius, I do appreciate the time and thought put forth in order to produce a decent post. Unfortunately, I have not a soul with whom I can PM. With that said, how do I join? Sign me up!

[Jedal]

I was just reading the Jungle Strike review and was reminded of the grammar squad thread I accidentally found on google. Finding this thread is actually what re-introduced me to the site. I thought I would lurk until I found my first thing to change. I have, so I'm signing up for the error busters if you'll have me.

Anyway, Jungle Strike, near the bottom: "Graphics" is being used in the plural, and should be followed by "are" not "is."