Thanks Blast.
Surprisingly enough I've got absolutely nothing to do at the moment, so I decided to look for that original version I promised (I had to dig deep for this one).
This should be it:
Quote:
Ten tears have never been shed.
Ten tears, where there were none before.
One, the largest, for love and all that it may bring.
Two, reluctantly, in pity of myself.
Three, in horror, for self-disgust and self-contempt.
Four, the most, for you and what you did.
Ten tears.
Ten tears have finaly been shed.
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I must admit that I was in doubt for a while about whether I should post this
. I'd say the current version is a lot better, right?
Especially now that I've fixed that awfull typo :P
And I'll add this little thingey.
Quote:
Where’s your shadow?
I know, I’m in it.
A deep dark crimson.
Did you know such is the darkness,
* you leave behind?
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I'll see if I can move on to something else next time.
:tnx:
-Doubler