LOL
My bad not checking the grammar in the review before updating, I was trying to make the entire update before the end of November Rain. I'll fix it now.
Thanks for pointing that out
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Edit: Ok I did a quick revision of it, and tsk tsk. You guys forgot a "transported" which was "transporte
r", and a "needles to say" I turned into "needles
s to say". Plus some minor tweaks
I'm a bit sleepy so I could have left out something, in that case please let me know via PM or posting here if you're not a member.