O-kay, dial-up sucks. It won't upload grrrr :angry: Okay, I tell you what I did now. I added a "shredder"(distortion guitar) broken down to two gutitars to the last two verses before the 9th, it sounds cool to me, kinda Nightwish/Linkin Park like thing
But I can't seem to find a connection melody to connect the verses. I need some filling between the verses, because if I place them all together, it will sound good but it will be too short for a song.... dunno...
Lemme aks you somethin, can you write a chorus for this song? I mean, for connecting the verses, and I make up a solo for the latter part. I thought about a simple rock/ballad like buildup: the 1-2 verses together, then the chorus, the 3-4 verses together then again chorus, then the 5-6 verses together, chorus and a solo, then full power 7-8 verses, (maybe a chorus here, but its optional) then a brake and slowly the last verse. I can do that, it you like, but I need lyrics to build to.
So whaddya say?
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