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Old 02-09-2006, 06:11 PM   #24
enidra
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ok... here's a poem from me. As I normally write in danish plz bare with me if it sucks in english

My toes
reaches the edge of the abyss
of my cold world
Jeg kan feel the stones below
my naked feet

one step
and my feets
becomes free

one jump
and my thoughts falls asleep

a fall into nowhere
where I however
have lived for so long
or not lived

A cold breath of air twitches me
but still my feet stands still

Behind me, are endless thoughts
distortions, entanglements
and senseless tears

Infront of me is freedom.

I fill my lungs
with the still cold air
It's shimmering for my retina
and I lift one of my feet,
move the feet forward and take a step

- away from the abyss
yet still directly down there.

-Enidra
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