Hiya Iowa
I was just wondering about your last poem - At the begining it's "you" who has/is the metaphorical* light yes? But at the end of the poem "you're" taking the light away... It's a tad confusing.
Did I miss something or did the device get muddled up along the way?
*I'm assuming it is a metaphor
By the way - I love the Gingerbread Ducks!
(Also, there's a post by post poem being created by folks over in the Games and Competitions section of the forum - the more the merrier!)