um... did you watch it yourself before posting it?
First; You need to learn how to handle a microphone first..
Put the mic to your chin and get a mic-fro....
Second; Lighting.. get some light-source so we can SEE you!
Third; you made NO attempts to make contact with me, the viewer. You just wiggled around and looked high, with closed eyes.
Sorry, can't comment on your actual standup, as the 3 points above prevented me from seeing it at all.....
Looking forward to you next attempt!
