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Old 20-01-2011, 07:08 PM   #147
Ohne Mitleid
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I don't know if I would have time in the future to dedicate to this. However, the following reviews need correction, as far as I can tell:

7th Legion - under the Notes section, last sentence - spelling: "...overwriting the oringal file, and play!" Should be 'original'

007 - License to Kill - last paragraph (typo?): "...fan and, offcourse, any Bond fan." Should be 'of course' instead of 'offcourse'

1-0 Soccer Manager. Rough English in spots. Suggest possible rework.

1000 Miglia
- Second paragraph, second sentence: "Manufactures needed to decrease..." Should be 'Manufacturers'
- Second paragraph, third sentences: "It was fist thought that..." Should be 'first'
- Third paragraph, third sentence: "When you finished select the year..." Should be 'When you finish, ' or 'When you are finished, ' or 'When you have finished'
- Fourth paragraph, fifth sentence: "When you like to know where the hell you are..." Should be 'When you want to know' or 'When you would like to know'
- Last paragraph under How to Run the Game: "But no prob, it is includes." Should be 'included'

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