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Old 09-02-2005, 07:02 PM   #28
Wael
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Originally posted by taikara@Feb 8 2005, 10:15 PM
I put words together pretty well, but I have really boring subject matter. I should try to write about other things than just broken hearts.
Yes... something less cliché,
The happy happy love? :blink:

Seriously,
The best poems always come from feelings,
(The way, I believe, you´ve wrote them)
Pure love, hate, loneliness?

You should write only when you feel like writing & of what you feel like writing,
For trying to write about something that isn´t "bubbling" inside just then,
Has usually the tendency to be written as noticeable reluctant words,
(If that makes any sense)

/ I might be wrong though /

Anyways,
Your poems are amazingly well written,
And I still can´t but be in the awe of your verbal talents /-
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