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[IberianWolf]

hah, nice one's you've got there, I really liked the solitary thingy one. really good stuff


here's anothe rpoem of mine... this one was actually turned into a song, though it didn't work out. oh well...

Violent Lovers Seldom Survive

His world
Is a million pieces of broken dreams and hopes
His rage never ceases, his love always drowns
And he can't hide the fact that he still loves her
When her knees are on the ground
And her lips are smiling at him

Her world has given up on her
All that she wanted was the kiss she never had
She screams tonight, her lips are sealed
But her eyes are not
She cries all night, but it's so different
When she's left to rot

His world
Has crumbled once again to find himself
Going up the stairs that once led him there
It's not enough, he felt her shell
Break apart, what does she have to bear
Her kiss was the reason
Her last kiss tasted like the world fell on him
Her wish was the reason
Her last wish was that time would never lack
She was wrong when the clock was just past midnight
He never sinned
And she walked away like it was the very last time
He'd see her face

Her world is in tones of crimson and hazel
Her room is intoxicated with the tears she bled
When your world is upside down what do you do?
Instead of killing yourself with the nearest cleaver you find
And she could find a million reasons to help her get through
She was so tired of bleeding
Her life she threw away

So now we have two broken souls
A peaceful end for a violent love


i've still got a long way to go.