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![]() This is a poem I wrote quite some time back. Thing is, I would like to have a melody to it and turn it into a song, sort of folk/ballad like, and I have no experience at writing such melodies. There are some problems here. The poem is 9 verses long, each consists of 4 short lines and no chorus. I have trouble finding a tune that will 'survive' through all the verses. One inspiration would be 'Stones' known from the Ultima games, that's inspiration but not copy. One idea was to have the first verse vocals only, then adding one instrument for each verse as the song gets more intense, peaking at the 8th verse before going vocals only and quiet at the 9th.
It's a dark poem, in a sort of E.A. Poe style, but there's a certain beauty in it too, I guess. So, a melody that captures both the moods in an old, (quasi)medieval style is really what I seek here. Even ideas are appreciated. (And no, It's not about suicide The Time has come, the End is nigh. Time for me to say goodbye Time to leave my Citadelle Time to leave this Pit of Hell The Years have slipped and I have slept. Years of grief, Oh how I wept. Years as slow as a dead heart Years that kept us two apart The Month of Janus saw me first Months of Winter's frozen bursts Months I longed to see the spring Months of Legends, Knights and Kings The Weeks I searched all through the marsh Weeks I wandered through the harse Weeks revealing emtpyness Weeks that proved be merciless The Days of Joy are memories Days of Terror cover these Days of Youth, of Brave and Strength Days forgotten in their lenght The Hour's near, I must be gone Hours, I have never known the Hours that I slept in fright Hours till the morning light The Minute's hand is crawling, creeping Minutes now, and still I'm sleeping Minutes, quick! Make haste or halt! Minutes as the Torturer's Salt The Seconds speak of my release Seconds taunt my disbelief Seconds! shriek I, is it true? Seconds silent: Not so soon. The Time has passed as did before Time to wait for ever more Time for Laughs and Love it seems Time for Life still in my dreams
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